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Cage Defender

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Date: 9:43 PM, 09/08/13
Which plotline sounds better?
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The plot for Dying of the Light differs from site to site, I was just wondering which you think sounded better 

 

A CIA agent about to retire due to Alzheimer's races the clock on a final mission. 

 

A CIA agent about to retire due to his increasing blindness races the clock on a final mission. 

 

For the most part they're the same and the title alludes to blindness.

 

Which do you think sounds better?



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Nic Newbie

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Date: 11:03 PM, 09/08/13
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I like first one better.

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Nicalicious

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Date: 4:01 AM, 09/09/13
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Given the title, blindness seems more likely, although I think it could refer to Alzheimer's also. That would certainly be a different kind of plot too. Both would be interesting to me.



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NIColicious Enchantress

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Date: 3:01 AM, 09/10/13
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Both lines kind of confuses me, as Alzheimer`s has nothing to do with Blindness, but, the second one sounds better to me!

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Nic Warrior

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Date: 8:41 AM, 09/10/13
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I like the second one.

 

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